英语四级翻译练习笔记③——大学英语四级考试2023年12月真题（第三套）

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引言（必看）

四级翻译评分标准分析及真题解析

四级翻译评分标准

四级翻译真题

学生作答

1. 评分

2. 修正翻译中的错误

错误标记：

3. 改正句子

4. 标出错误单词

5. 标准答案

6. 常考万能句子

7.重点单词的中文意思

引言（必看）

这是一篇英语四级翻译的练习的专栏，如果相信我的话就将这篇专栏的所有翻译背诵完，你的翻译将会有质的变化。这句话是我背完32篇翻译真题原文后总结出的答案，四级已过，589分，翻译应该接近满分了~可以试试，我之前翻译也很差，但练完确实收获很多，基本上考点都是一样的。

四级翻译评分标准分析及真题解析

四级翻译评分标准

四级翻译部分采用采点给分的方法，即根据错误的多少扣除相应分数。满分为15分，根据译文的准确性和流畅性分为六个档次：

13-15分：译文准确表达了原文的意思。用词贴切，行文流畅，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。
10-12分：译文基本上表达了原文的意思。文字通顺、连贯，无重大语言错误。
7-9分：译文勉强表达了原文的意思。用词欠准确，语言错误相当多，其中有些是严重语言错误。
4-6分：译文仅表达了一小部分原文的意思。用词不准确，有相当多的严重语言错误。
1-3分：译文支离破碎。除个别词语或句子，绝大部分文字没有表达原文意思。
0分：未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或译文与原文毫不相关。

四级翻译真题

原文：改革开放以来，中国人民生活水平不断提高，这在人们的饮食(dit)变化上得到充分体现。如今，人们不再满足于吃得饱，而是追求吃得更加安全、更加营养、更加健康，食物也愈来愈丰富多样，不再限于本地的农产品。物流业(logistics industry)的发展使人们很容易品尝到全国各地的特产。毫无疑问，食品质量与饮食结构的改善为增进人们健康提供了有力的保障。

学生作答

Since the reform and opening up,Chinese people's living standard is continus to raise, though people's diet change can enough express.Nowadays,people not only satisfied with having enough to eat,but also hope to eat more safely,nutritiously and healthily, food is more diverse, is not limited of local produce. Logistics industry's development help people to eat all kinds of equite food in China.No problem, eat quite and jiegou are imporved can increase people's healthy and give strongly protect.

1. 评分

根据四级翻译评分标准，你的翻译大致属于3-6分之间。具体原因如下：

译文勉强表达了原文的意思：虽然能看出原文的意思，但有很多用词和语法错误，使得句子难以理解。
用词欠准确：许多单词和短语使用不当，影响理解。
语言错误相当多：包括语法错误和拼写错误。

2. 修正翻译中的错误

错误标记：

continus（拼写错误，应为“continues”）
raise（词语错误，应为“rise”）
though（词语错误，应为“as shown in”）
enough express（词语错误，应为“fully reflected”）
satisfied（时态错误，应为“satisfy”）
hope（词语错误，应为“strive”）
more safely（用词不当，应为“safer”）
food is more diverse（语法错误，应为“food has become more diverse”）
is not limited of（语法错误，应为“is no longer limited to”）
help（语法错误，应为“helps”）
equite（拼写错误，应为“specialty foods”）
No problem（不符合上下文，应为“Undoubtedly”）
eat quite and jiegou are imporved（用词和语法错误，应为“the improvement in food quality and diet structure”）
healthy（词语错误，应为“health”）
give strongly protect（语法错误，应为“provide strong protection”）

3. 改正句子

错误句子：Since the reform and opening up, Chinese people's living standard is continus to raise, though people's diet change can enough express.

改正句子：Since the reform and opening up, Chinese people's living standards have continued to rise, as shown in the changes in their diet.
错误句子：Nowadays, people not only satisfied with having enough to eat, but also hope to eat more safely, nutritiously and healthily, food is more diverse, is not limited of local produce.

改正句子：Nowadays, people are not only satisfied with having enough to eat, but also strive to eat safer, more nutritious, and healthier food. Food has become more diverse and is no longer limited to local produce.
错误句子：Logistics industry's development help people to eat all kinds of equite food in China.

改正句子：The development of the logistics industry helps people enjoy specialty foods from all over China.
错误句子：No problem, eat quite and jiegou are imporved can increase people's healthy and give strongly protect.

改正句子：Undoubtedly, the improvement in food quality and diet structure enhances people's health and provides strong protection.

4. 标出错误单词

continus → continues
raise → rise
though → as shown in
enough express → fully reflected
satisfied → satisfy
hope → strive
more safely → safer
food is more diverse → food has become more diverse
is not limited of → is no longer limited to
help → helps
equite → specialty foods
No problem → Undoubtedly
eat quite and jiegou are imporved → the improvement in food quality and diet structure
healthy → health
give strongly protect → provide strong protection

5. 标准答案

Since the reform and opening up, Chinese people's living standards have continuously improved, as evidenced by changes in their diets. Nowadays, people are not only satisfied with having enough to eat, but also pursue safer, more nutritious, and healthier food. Food has become increasingly diverse and is no longer limited to local produce. The development of the logistics industry makes it easy for people to taste specialties from across the country. Undoubtedly, the improvement in food quality and diet structure has provided a strong guarantee for enhancing people's health.